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Review:Secret Santa says:
Ho ho ho!

It's Secret Santa with one last review for you during the holidays!

This was a really fun chapter to read. All of them have been, but this was even MORE fun, if that was possible. I loved the swords and how they ended up intimidating poor Peter who could barely drag his around behind him. And then James getting the plastic swords and POINTERS for Merlin's sake! That was too funny.

I loved reading about how James was trying to make it up to Lily and just ended up making things worse and worse. Brand new jumpers? A 5 year old's Potions book? And it better have been Sirius' idea with the bowl, because that was just gross! Poor Lily! James will have to learn hard lessons to get through to her after all that. You really had fun heaping on the bad for him, didn't you? Well, that's a good thing because I enjoyed reading it all!

Aww, and the bit with Peter and his sister just about broke my heart. I can only guess what badness you will reveal to us in future chapters regarding his back story. I feel so badly for him that it hurts.

And then of course, more James. He certainly likes being the center of attention, doesn't he? I know that he only got one POV in this chapter, but besides Peter's section, I feel like he was taking over the whole thing. I guess it was because of his birthday, after all. Haha! Spoiled little thing. And he's only twelve! The picture at the end with Lily and the gang will probably end up somewhere important later on. I can't wait to see what you do with that.

I hope you had a fun Secret Santa experience. I loved being your Secret Santa this year. I felt like getting to read this awesome story was a present for me too!

Happy New Year

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