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Review:Your Secret Santa says:
Hello there :)


Wow. I just had to say that first. This is so beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. It's . . . I don't even have words. It's really good. My favourite story so far. It's . . . WOW. It's fantastic. And to think you managed to do this in 500 words! That's far better than some of the stories I have read that has over 30 chapters, and you did this in 500 words. I'm really impressed.

What I love the most is actually the characterization. You can tell that Lily is both scared and angry. She is afraid because she is after all a muggleborn. She knows the dark lord hates her just for that, and she knows he will likely attack and/or kill her at some point. That's why she hopes it's just a nightmare. At the same time, she hates them for thinking less of her because of her blood status. This makes her want to fight back. To, in some ways, prove that she is more than her blood status. That's just the way I saw though.

And then there is Snape. I think Lily and Snape are really good friends before this happened. It seems like Lily see him as the one person she can trust more than anything, and that's why she feels so betrayed when he calls her a mudblood. The one person she trusted, has suddenly turned into someone that she both fears and hates. All of a sudden, she is hated almost everywhere. Because by saying that one word, he basically said he thinks less of her because she is a muggleborn. It's really well-written.

Wow. I just loved the whole story. 10/10 (would give it more, but I doesn't go higher so . . .)

- Your Secret Santa

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