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Review:Secret Santa says:
Dear Yoshi_Kitten,

Your so mean leaving it on such a cliff hanger! I'm so glad I have the next chapter waiting for me so I don't have to wait!!

You do need to be a bit more careful, in some places you miss words out and stuff like that. It doesn't detract from your story as such but you've written such a great story that it would make it even better!!

I thought you did an amazing job of describing the potions effects! Poor Lucius! He's gone through so much! I love the friendship you have created between Lucius and Severus, even though Voldmort had forbidden it (I thought was a great idea by the way) they obviously will do anything for each other and is really nice to see through all the darkness you have created!

Oh Percy! I really can't stand him in this! I love characters you can hate and you really have built his character up well! You have kept his canon pompous nature but have turned it so much darker and I love it! Big well done to you on that!!

I really need to move on though as the suspense is killing me! I really hope you let Draco let his guard down soon! I want some Droxi goodness :D

Love from,
Secret Santa x

Author's Response: Hey now, I love my cliffhangers, so you should probly expect more to come, lol! XD

I know I seriously need to go back thru and do a serious clean-out, it's just SOO time consuming tho, you know? I've always said that of I ever get TA status on here that that'll be the 2st thing I do tho... Wishful thinking, I know, but a girl can dream. *sigh* =/

I like that you can appreciate Snape and Lucius' relationship tho. Not too many people comment on that, so I never really know how it is being intercepted. I know there's a bit of an age difference between the two of them, but I still feel like that would bond over their common hatred of Voldemort, you know? You seem to think outside the box and are very good at guessing things tho... I like that about you, lol!! :)

Hahaha, if you hate Percy now, just wait until later! It's good to know that you "love to hate" him, cuz I absolutely love reading people's reactions to him, lol! Every story needs a good Villain, and Percy is definitely mine. I am quite proud of the way his character develops... you'll see. ;)

Again, I cannot tell you how pleased I am to see that you are enjoying this so much!! You are honestly the Best SS that I have ever had!! Happy New Years hun, and thanks so much for all you have done for me!! =D


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