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Review:Uncharted says:
Ha ha the ending :) You do not seem like this is your first fanfiction... I very much like your story so far, especially the character of Albus. He has a very different personality than in most other stories, and I liked how you made him change personalities between school and home. It will be interesting to see the interaction between them next chapter. He seems kind of clueless if he really thought that Hattie was that superficial, but I will reserve judgement :)

The biggest reason I like this story is because of your writing style. You are very good at describing things and I love all of your magical references. All of Roxy's pranks and the Catapult Caramels made me laugh too, and I quite liked the sock one :) They were all very creative and well fitting. I really like it so far, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I can assure you it feels like my first to me! But I'm happy to know it doesn't read like I'm struggling!
I'm glad that you find Albus interesting, that was the intended effect :) He is a bit clueless...we'll have to see if he redeems himself ;) I'm also pleased to know that you enjoy the little things like Roxy's pranks. Sometimes I worry that there's too many of them, and they're only little fillers - but I do like writing them.
The next chapter will come ASAP, but first I need to decide properly what will go down in the Potions classroom, I keep changing my mind! haha
Thanks again for reviewing, it's much appreciated :)

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