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Review:peppersweet says:
The delightful Melissa pointed me in the direction of this story after I spent some time bemoaning the fluffy cheerfulness of teenage pregnancy fanfiction stories, and I'm so glad she did. This is a perfect fresh spin on what is an alarmingly cliched plot device. It's so realistic! I think the most important 'fresh' bit of it was the attitude of Molly's boyfriend, and of Molly and Audrey towards him. I so often see teenage pregnancy fics where the father ends up being some mature-beyond-his-years saint who sticks with the girl to the bitter end. Er, not in many cases. Audrey may seem like the strict, uptight mother, but I found myself sympathising so much for her in this piece, as well as Molly, although Molly's naivety and optimism really did frustrate me at times.

And this was actually a pretty sad piece, but it was phenomenal. Well done you ♥

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