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Review:seekers_destiny says:
The invitations and impatient owls were an amusing introduction to the chapter. Charlie's sudden reappearance was interesting and I hope we learn more about the two new characters. It was also interesting how things were following the pattern of canon but in other countries this time (and also reminded me of Hitler a little again). The old Quidditch equipment and the game of tag were a nice diversion. Harry's curiosity about bonding was intriguing and made me wonder if he is thinking ahead about Ginny and himself. I also enjoyed the return of Percy and he was as long-winded as I expected but the twins nearly followed suit. They ought to be more careful! (just kidding)

I loved the last line: What ever can we do about the twins?

She could mean that in many different ways but getting them paired off would not be the first to occur to me.

I only found one this time:
casing him up around one of the towers
chasing him up around one of the towers

Author's Response: As always, thank you and I will make the correction.

I am glad you liked the opening with the owls. I introduced Kyne as a new owl in this story and it wouldn't do to have no mention of him again. And Don't worry, you will learn more about the Burgestikoffs, Helena is destined to become a Weasley obviously, and I introduced Alex for a specific reason, so you will definitely see more of her. (And, the similarities to Hitler are not at all lost on me.)
I really wanted a playful diversion in the chapter so the Quidditch filled that bill nicely, I am glad you enjoyed it. Harry will probably donate all that old equipment to the Quidditch Museum when it is all updated.
I am not going to say too much about bonding here as it will come up again certainly in the chapter with Bill and Fleur's wedding, and I don't want to say exactly where Harry's curiosity will take him. Let's just say it was establishing information for the whole concept of "bonding" for the story.
Yes, Percy can be a bit long winded! It was fun to write his speech, I just sort of let myself rabble and didn't edit it too much. Also, I enjoyed letting the Twins respond.
So, I am curious... about the last line... What was the first thing that occurred to you, if not a reference to getting them paired off? I know Molly could be thinking several things, but given the context, I was thinking about finding them wives. What were you thinking?

Thank you so much for your comments!


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