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Review:Secret Santa says:
Great chapter again! I hope you will continue this soon. I saw on your page that you are focusing on another story currently.

I think Nathalie and Albus seem to have better luck with friends in their own house so far than the other two. I liked to see the new characters again and more of Scorpius and Nathalie.

Only critique I really have this time is that the first paragraph was a little bit unclear for me at first. It does say what you mean, but I had to read it through several times until I figured out which was about who, like who was more charismatic and who wasn't.

I love to read about the lessons. I always loved to read that in the books too as they give a bit more of the magic side and you write them well.

I'm really intrigued by the main plot as well. Scorpius was a little sneaky so he might have deserved to get into a little trouble, but let's see what happens. :)

Author's Response: Right now, I think I might focus on River Sea for a little while, or at least until I get yet another plot bunny, which is inevitable :p I'm glad you're enjoying it so much, though -- I really enjoy writing it.

I will definitely keep this review in mind when revamping the story, so thanks for pointing that bit out about the first paragraph! I've noticed that tends to happen with at least one of my chapters in a story, so it's definitely something I'm going to fix eventually. Personally, I love the lessons, but then again, I'm that type of person who likes school well enough even on really, really bad days so I can't talk xD

Haha, he definitely deserved it, I think! Don't worry though, someone will be around to rescue him, so to speak, in the next chapter. Thanks again for your reviews, I really enjoyed reading about what you think! :D

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