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Review:Pixileanin says:
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This.

"Of course, these were wizards she was dealing with - sure, transfiguring an animal into a water-goblet made completesense, but as soon as you tried to talk chemistry with them they blanked out."

I loved that line. It said so much about wizards and the world that Lily came from, and of course about her character and where she is in life. I love your premise and your fresh take on Lily and how you skipped all the boring parts and just jumped into the seventh year of the Marauders and now we get to see what comes of it. I love how one of her friends knows how to do maths and is willing to make her do this thing and how Lily is so willing to go all out for the sake of "science" of all things.

Neat premise. Engaging first chapter. Keep running with this. It's gotta be good!

Author's Response: Skipping the boring parts is pure laziness on my part XD But yeah, nothing interesting happens then anyways, and I figured I would just jump into the good stuff XD

and I'm glad you liked it! I always wondered how much purebloods knew outside of magic, like basic maths, and that was something I wanted to toy with. Thank you so much for the review - I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I definitely plan to keep going! xx


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