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Review:Mystique says:
Hey. I'm sorry a bit late with your requested review, but here I am ready to review.

I really love Edie - already I feel like she is one of my friends - and her narrative tone is really great. Especially her sarcasm and wit. I love this comment "Dean, Seamus and I frolicking through a field towards a giant pint of ale at the end of a rainbow." I laughed when I read it.

Poor Edie. She didn't really have a great night did she. What with being kissed by a drunk Viktor Krum and all that. Although I'm not to sure that it really is Viktor Krum as I don't think that he would have punched someone that supported Bulgaria and he most certainly does not have a Scottish sounding accent. But I think Rose's offer makes up for quite a bit of what's happened.

In your area of concern you asked about Rose an whether she was a bit to much like a stock character. I personally don't think she is like one at all. She has her own developed personality and it doesn't - to me at least - seem at all cliched. I don't really think I've read about a character quite like her. And although I loved the little diagrams she had about the Snitch with the words "Throw it" next to it, I think that she might know a little bit more about Quidditch as she most likely attended the matches whilst at Hogwarts and would have probably picked up on a few details. I'm certainly intrigued though, as to why Rose asked Edie to write an article for her as it doesn't seem like an article that one would turn down.

Author's Response: Hello there! Thank you thank you thank you!

I really am kind of mean to poor Edie, aren't I? ha. There's something to be said about the young female in pop culture lately; I think that in many cases her roles in humorous movies/TV shows have changed drastically from the hot yet clumsy girl next door to the really flawed, awkward, down-on-her-luck type that was traditionally reserved for male roles (a la Bridesmaids or New Girl?). Either way I am so glad that women are finally getting to play these roles and are being real human beings. So I wanted my OC to support that idea, instead of these sensible, scandalously dressed, clumsy and attractive women typically found in pop culture (like Big Bang Theory)... Wow. End rant. haha, sorry, it's easy for me to get on my soap box!!

Anyway! That's a good point about Rose probably knowing something about Quidditch due to her time at Hogwarts. I think I'll need to clarify in the story. Maybe she just never went because sports aren't her thing, or maybe she only went to stare at the boys and has no idea what actually happened during the games... XD

Thank you again, times a zillion, and pardon my lengthy response!


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