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Review:Secret Santa :D says:
Yay, another amazing chapter! I'm glad George and Hannah are starting some improvements on the shop... I think it could really help George in the long run!

The part where Hannah explains why she is there to help him was so sweet. Saying that the shop reminded her of her mother and that it made her feel more at home was probably a shock for George to hear and I bet it made him want to open it back up again even more. George and Hannah seem to have a lot in common and I like that... ahhh, you are turning me into a non-cannon girl! :p

I really liked the approach Hannah took with George about opening up about Fred. I feel like people are often too soft on other people when they lose someone (I hope that doesn't sound harsh), but Hannah was able to have a firm conversation with him about getting help. I think that's what everyone needs when they lose someone; time to grieve, and then someone to be there for them when they want to talk :)

I was surprised that George just let her walk out like that, but then to find out that he hadn't moved from that spot all night and Hannah finding him leads me to believe he was a little guilty about how he snapped at her. It's a good thing he is starting to open up to Hannah, and I'm sure Hannah will be able to help him get through it :)

Please, please, please update soon! I really like where this story is going and I really want to read more! :D

Nice job!

Author's Response: Haha, I apologise again! I don't want to upset anyone's canon beliefs. ;) I really love writing them together though because it's such a great friendship. At least in my head anyway...

The whole idea is that Fred's death and the subsequent grief is completely consuming George, to the point where it's taken over his life. That conversation with Hannah is definitely a wake up call for him!

This story is my next update so hopefully there'll be another chapter soon! :)


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