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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello! :*)

You didn't ask me to review this for you but I thought that I would anyway. And, oh, my goodness, I have to inhale a little because I almost burst into tears. I try to avoid Fred's funerals when I read FF's, mostly because I'm such a sap and I don't want to blubber my way through a review. But I'll do it for you! :D
Interesting narration with this too, I don't think I read too many in second person (?) and I thought that it was a unique bit for this. I felt closer to George through this entire thing and his pain was so wonderfully written that I had to pause a little before I could continue. It paints such a picture in my mind, seeing him there at his brother's funeral, wanting and needing to say something but giving in to his own sadness. :(
I thought you wrote it beautifully.
And, oh, the conversation with Fred! I sniffled, my lip tremble and I laughed and wished that it could have gone on for a lot longer. I thought that him coming to see George and bringing him back up, even when the conversation was stilted a little, was what he needed. I think knowing that he had Fred and that he could still love him even after he was gone meant the most. :)
And just a hint of Georgelina in the future? Hehe. I'm a huge shipper for that so perhaps you'll give me a whole story someday? *Wink, wink*
Anyway, this was pretty amazing and I really loved it. I only spotted two or three grammar things but otherwise, it was wonderful. :)
I've got two Georgelina things on my site and I thought that, since you like Fred/George and such anyway, if you would want to read them? :D
Anyway, great job!
Much love and see you on the forums!
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello! Aww thanks so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it!

I know what you mean about getting upset, I sit and cry my way through so many of these. Killing Fred absolutely killed me when I read it in the books. I just didn't expect it and it really broke my heart! So even though I hate that it happened I really wanted to give Fred the funeral I imagined and also give him the chance to say bye and help George out :).

Yes I had to get a bit of Georgelina in there. I just didn't picture it happening though until George knew Fred was okay with it so this is him giving George his blessing so to speak :). I would love to write more about it but I'll have to see if inspiration hits me. I was intending to do one about George though later in life with him reflecting over his life - whether you'd be interested in that? I would love to check out your stuff - I promise I will be visiting you the second I get chance too!

Thanks again for a lovely review - it has made my day and I will therefore be putting it on the Reviews that made your day topic :D

Lauren


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