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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Dudley messing around with magic! Dudely going to St. Mungo's of all places! Wow, I was not expecting that. I mean, I knew he would end up disappointing his father's desires for him to have a painfully normal life, since the ship is called 'Chudley', but I'd assumed he would just slam into her one day instead of wandering off into the magical realm all of his own inclination. Sometimes I really wonder what's going on up there in his wee walnut brain.

Petunia running away to live with Muriel - LOL! I love how that was just casually thrown in there. So now Vernon's life is in a careful downward spiral that he pretends not to notice, all for the sake of being as normal as possible. That is one delusional man. Once he discovers where his son has been, he's going to explode or something. I think he might be the Muggle equivalent of Umbridge, being a bigot who fears what is different and just loves to be in charge and yell at people. Vernon and Umbridge would make a perfectly horrible Romeo/Juliet pairing.

Anyway, fab beginning to a story! I read Helen's review and she sounds excited about it. She's a lucky girl!

Thank you for participating in my challenge. :)

Author's Response: I KNOW. Dudders is being so daring its ridiculous - I mean going near Harry even though he got a half-giant to give him a pig's tail! They grow up so fast. ♥

But I've got a bit more up my sleeve in terms of what's happening and hopefully this will ease Dudley into a bit more so that it's not such a shock for him, poor lamb.

Oh my gosh, Vernon/Umbridge sounds like a great ship and I want to write it and write it now. Imagine the possiblities!!!

Thank YOU for reviewing with your loveliness, and yes I do hope Helen likes what's to come! :D


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