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Review:Secret Santa says:
Ooooh! Hogwarts is starting to crumble! Yay! I love how you are little by little both introducing characters here and getting the plot to start to unfold.

I liked to see the new, possibly more minor, characters here. Hattie and Nydia were a nice addition although Nydia didn't seem that nice. And like I said in my previous review I was expecting Rose to turn out a bit nicer later than she was in the first chapter, which happened here. It was nice to see more of both her and Albus and I like hw you write them. :) Albus's new friends also seem really nice and fun. They make me smile!

I like the little glimpses here of the four main characters getting together at some point. Rose and Nathalie sort of meet and Rose notices that they could be friends. Rose feels a little lonely too and needs another friend and Albus thinks of both her and Scorpius and misses them. I like it how that sets up some seeds for their friendship.

This was another enjoyable chapter and I will continue reading. :)

Author's Response: I don't think I've ever seen a plot unfold so fast in one of my own stories, so that really surprised me xD I'm very fond of Hattie and Nydia and the other more minor characters, myself -- after all, the quartet's only friends aren't each other, or else they'd be very lonely right now. I loved the relationship between Albus and his friends as well, I thought it was sweet, but then again, I am the author :p Characterisation is actually one of my better points, so I'm glad it shows in this chapter!

Aw, Albus is a sentimental kid, isn't he? And Rose is just plain old lonely, so no one can really blame her if she starts wondering if even strangers can be her friends -- being eleven is a tough time, after all! Anyway, I'm really glad you liked this chapter and sorry again for my late response, but I really enjoyed getting your reviews, so thank you! :)

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