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Review:Elf on the TGS shelf says:
I really liked getting a glimpse of Scorpius's thoughts pertaining to that summer when he really started 'seeing' Rose.

I have to say that James/Roxanne/Rose group really do feel like bullies sometimes, but I suppose I'll just have to trust that she was telling the truth about that person deserving getting jinxed. Or at least deserving it a little bit.

Scorpius seems so torn, it's absolutely adorable. It's like Rose is the cut you just keep picking at even though you know it hurts, you can't stop. Maybe because there was so much focus on the previous summer in the second section, but this chapter didn't feel nearly as repetitive as the last. And even the repetitive feeling wasn't bad at all, because I do find myself getting really excited to see the development for the next train ride. But yeah, this one was much easier to keep the two sections straight in my mind.

And the little remark to the dream! Hahaha poor guy. He really has it bad.

I know your probably getting so sick of hearing this, but I am just in love with the way you write next gen.

Author's Response: The person was mouthing off about James failing some tests at the end of his fourth year and worrying about his OWLs - whether or not that counts as deserving is your call. :P

I love that analogy - Rose is definitely the cut that Scorpius can't stop poking at!

Thank you so much for the lovely review!

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