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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Mel! I totally meant to review this yesterday, and then all of a sudden I had five PMs and beta jobs and what have you, and this sort of fell by the wayside. Which I think you knew anyway. :P But I'm so glad that I found the time to read this tonight!

Forever thrilled that you wrote me a Harry one-shot. And dark!Harry, too! ♥ That is my favorite kind of Harry. And you did it so well, too! Ooh, I love all the little deathly things you sprinkled throughout this; it was bleak, but appropriately so, and the sort of bleak I love to read about. My heart broke when you made little Lily appear, though. :( And at just how many people were in the parade (Cedriccc). But I loved the way you wrote Sirius. I think he would have been just like that, if he'd been given the chance to grow old! Such cruelty, all these people who died before their times.

I love the imagery you put into this, too! Especially how you managed to convey darkness in so many different ways. The way you described things in the story enhanced the tone of it so well -- this was one of my favorite lines:

Patting along the moist pavement, his bent and crooked fingers closed around the wire frames. -- I don't know what struck me about this in particular, but there's something so broken and defeated about it, even though it's small, and it just seems so Harry. Fantastic!

I can't tell you how happy I am that you were willing to write me this one-shot. ♥ You're a fantastic friend, Mel! Thank you so much!!

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