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Review:Mystique says:
Wow. This story is truly beautiful. I have to admit that I was quite blown away by it. I loved how you divide the story into little sections, my favourite was probably lightning-struck, just because I really liked hearing Lavender's point of view about her relationship with Ron. I though that it was really accurately written and extremely true to canon.

I love the descriptions that you gave of Parvati versus Padma. They seem to me at least, to be really unique and characteristic, especially with the golden butterfly hair clip that Parvati wears in the books.

I was wondering why there wasn't much of a mention of Viola during Lavender's school years.

Apart from that I really liked this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, even the length, and all I have for you about the story, is praise.

Charlie

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Charlie!

I'm so happy that you like it and were not deterred by the length. It was a rather difficult thing to write precisely because of its length. I never intended for it to go so out of hand and bloat up to a massive 9000+ words :)

As for the Viola bit, I meant her to sort of drop out of Lavender's life. I didn't intend for the two to be close in their teenage years. I know it's all rahter unexplained, but I'm tried to rectify this a wee bit (just a wee bit) in the edited version, which is currently in the queue.

Thanks so very much once again for taking the time to read and review :)

-teh


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