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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
I really enjoyed this, especially how well you intertwined both Harry and Ginny together like you did by focusing on the way they moved in the moonlight (as though they were together even though they were miles apart). That said, I really think the second person perspective worked well for this piece. I'm not a huge fan of second person, only because of how hard it is to pull off, but I do like it when it fits and is written well. And I think you pulled the second person voice off quite well and it only emphasized how far away these two were, yet it offered a feeling of connection between them.

I also applaud you stepping out of your comfort zone to write a romance because I've, so far, only read your action stories. You're great at action, but you did just as great at romance here in this piece. I really felt the longing that both Harry and Ginny were feeling the more I read, and the ending was so perfect. It fit so well to have that last sentence being thought by both of them. It really sharpened the love they had for each other, as well as showing how connected they felt to each other on that night of all nights with the moon shining down, creating a path toward each other. 10/10

Excellent job, Rachel! (: -hugs-

Author's Response: I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this! This story was written entirely so I could snag this gorg banner, but I like the way it turned out in spite of all that. :P The style, I think, was the most fun part about it, because I'd done the same thing in an earlier Ron/Hermione one-shot, and it worked so well that I knew it could work here, too, even though Harry/Ginny really isn't really a pairing I'm fond of. Second person is actually one of my favorite points of view to write, and I'm glad you think it was pulled off well here!

It's actually funny you mention that, because I'm way more comfortable with writing romance than writing action. :P Romance is the center of most of my stories, and even before I started posting here... I wrote EVERYTHING for romance! I always think I'm a little shoddy at action/adventure, so actually to hear that you like it is one of the best things in the world. ♥ That made my day!

Thank you so much for the review, Leslie! And I'm sorry I'm a little slow in responding; I'm trying to correct that now. :D I hope to see you back very soon!!


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