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Review:Kanjibunny says:
Oooh this chapter was really nice:) I liked it a lot. But there's one teeny thing... The things happen very suddenly? Like for example. Erm... When hermione heard about ron's wish, she burst into tears? I think you could be a little more specific on that. Elaborate?because it sometimes gives us readers a 'shock' or make us feel like we skipped a few lines or something, that we jumped into another hairpin turn.
But I love your story :) it's turning out nicely
Just. Some things happen quite randomly and are a bit 'over'. As in, too much and a little bit exaggerating (a little. But that's how I feel as a reader)
I really really hope you will post lots more cuz I love this story (have I mentioned that?) so very much :D
Thank you!! -flies away-

Author's Response: Yeah a few other of my loyal readers (love you all) have said i need to slow down and i promise i will and i hope to start my next chapter soon in the mean time you could read Dark Mistress by my better half or Differenes Aside by both of us

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