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Review:potterfan310 says:

I love teen pregnancy stories and I love Albus/OC.
It's nice for a change to see two OC characters especially since it wasn't one of the Potter/Weasley clan who knocked Ashley up.

I really like Ashley and her personality, you've done a good job making her your own. I'm curious as to who her mother was through, was it a cannon charcter or an OC??

Albus is such a sweetie, and I think having him and Ashley as best friends rather than him being the father is great, since we don't see that much.

I have a feeling that maybe Ashley and Al get together and then they tell everyone the baby's his or he takes the role as the baby's dad once it's born.

I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Deffinatly adding it to my favs :D
Soph :)

Author's Response: This is lovely to hear! I honestly gave up on this because it seemed to me that it wasn't good enough and I didn't think anyone liked it, haha. Thank you very much, you've inspired me to carry on!

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