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Review:potterfan310 says:
I've read two other teen pregnancy stories from the male's POV but I've never read a teen pregnancy story where Louis is the father. So yay you for originality. :D

I don't normally read many stories about Louis but you've done a really good job of characterising him and making him your own. He's so concerened about Freya and the baby and you can see that, you can feel his emotions and his struggles.

I'm not a big of Freya's parents right now, especially her dad. Is he forgetting that Louis has rights too?

I really can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens, will Freya do what her father wants and go through with adoption or will Louis be the one left holding the baby???

I'm deffinatly adding this to my favs :D Keep up the good work.


Soph :D

Author's Response: Thank you, I wanted to have a next gen person that wasn't James or Albus.
Thank you, I'm so glad that you liked him.
Oh I'm not either, they're not very nice to say the least, they're just caring about their own daughter so haven't taken Louis's feelings into consideration at all.
I shall be writing the next chapter soon, I've just not really had the time at the moment. Ah with that you shall have to wait and see :D
Awww yay! Thank you for adding this story to your favs, I really hope that you continue reading and enjoying this story :D

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