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Review:Secret Santa says:
Oh the plot thickens!

We now have dead bodies, a centuries old wizard giving Hermione instructions and a very confused Hermione. o.o

I love the way in which you depicted Hermione Granger in this story. She is such a key element to the central plot line of Harry Potter and you've captured her essence brillantly in this. It's just like her to want to continue her studies for as much as possible and attend University just because she can. In my opinion, you've really highlighted her curiosity and booksmart.

The action scenes were very well written, I felt my heart quicken with the suspense and the emotion of it. Those paragraphs were fast paced and alert and fitted in perfectly with the whole story.

As for Godric, I really like his accent. I couldn't bring myself to write anything in Founder Era or about the Founders, because I'm sure I would miss something crucial like accent or beliefs that were common to the UK in that time and age!

Keep up the good work and I'll see you next chapter!

Author's Response: I really like reading novels set in the medieval times and during the time I see the founders having lived. I am so glad that you enjoyed this chapter and I wanted to thank you so much for the review.

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