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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

Its Gabbie here, with your requested review and goodness, what on earth is this amazing stuff? I was really drawn in from the first few sentences and I love that you didn't give away the narrator right away. It gave a sense of mystery to the story and I kept trying to piece together who the character was by the little hints you gave me. From the beginning, I know that there's pain of course and you mentioned the War, but what's so great about this is that you don't give any defining characteristics right away. A painful memory, a strange letter...that could be anyone suffering. Harry, Ron, Snape even. The time period as well gave me more time to unravel the mystery around this and I really liked how you have this written. Just those few little lines made me shiver a little and I was able to picture it so perfectly in my mind, though the face of your narrator was still blank. Hehehe.
And then, finally, I realize that you're talking about Mr. Draco Malfoy. For a moment I wasn't sure if this was going to be a Dramione or not because this certainly has a haunted air about it that's used alot in those stories. And then I pushed that thought aside and wondered, could this be a Draco/Astoria? Is this Post-War Draco dealing with his wife's leaving him? So many questions and by the time that last letter arrived, along with those dreams, I was hooked. And what the heck? He killed Pansy?! He was blaming her for so long in the beginning that I thought there was something else going on, a squabble or something. But wha.?! You have to make these one-shots, I demand to know more about this!!!
Ah! There were a few grammar things in the beginning, but all in all this was amazing. Make more of these. Like, immediately. >:D
Much love and thanks for the great read darling!

Author's Response: Oh my God Gabbie! You are actually the best. Ever. Not even joking. This review was just wonderful and brightening my day :D
I'm so so so so so glad you enjoyed it!!!
I'll defo write those one shots at some point :) Even if I don't put them up, I'll PM them to you xx :D
Thanks again!! You're amazing!
:D :D

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