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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I'm here with your review to finish up our swap and I'm really sorry that I didn't get here much sooner. I was being fat and ate too much yesterday and well, let's just say that my stomach is bigger than it should be. :p
I'd wanted to check out this story immediately after you spoke about it in your lovely review for my story "Need" (I still blush reading it by the way).
Thre have only been a few stories that I've read with Theo/OC characters but I never read one quite like this.
The first few opening chapters make me a little uneasy because I'm getting the sense that this story might not be as light and fluffy as some of the other stories I've read. The feeling that things wwere being told from someone else's POV was really interesting, adding a bit of mystery to the story that I thought was really unique. Usuallly, the main character starts off the story but I could obviously see that this wasn't going to fall in line with that technique.
I really did enjoy the first few glimpses of Morgana that you gave us. Her encounter with Draco (Fangirls) was a breath of fresh air and I loved that you gave us just a hint of her heritage. I was relieved that she wasn't fawning and swooning all over him just because he was a wealthy pureblood and I think Morgan might be my best friend right now. Hahaha.
What I also enjoyed was the sly little future references to how Morgan would be. I'm really curious to know how her character develops and oh, goodness, she ran into my favorite twins!
Just so you know, I'm a HUGE fan of George so I sort of blacked out with envy at her luck! Hahaha.
Curious to know how their interaction is going to be because she doesn't seem to be a very open person and the twins are, you know, the twins. Hahaha.
Will they annoy her to death? Haha.
Anyway, this was a good read and I didn't spot anything that needed to be changed or looked over and I'm glad that I stopped by!
I'll see you on the forums!
Much love,
Gabbie

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