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Review:Secret Santa says:
Ho ho ho! What time is it? It's time for another review!

Oh, the way you began this chapter already had me thinking bad thoughts.

"Silence. The house was completely silent."

I knew nothing good could come of this, and obviously, nothing did. Sirius' home life is really horrible, and I couldn't help but feel so badly for him and Regulus and what they had to go through. I really loved the "silence" motif you used at the beginning, drawing us in to his world, as if anything was going to happen in the next instant, and none of it good.

It was good that you did Remus next. Oh, the emotional whirlwind you set us up for. Finally, I thought, a happy scene! Remus is getting a chance to have a happy holiday and everything is GOOD... and then we got to Peter and I felt all bad again. The bills and his mom and his dad... gah! How horrible! Your descriptives are really great, because I saw it all and it made me all wimpery.

I loved the transition to James whining to his mum. Such a poetic switch! His thoughts about what the Black family would be up to was so naive, especially since you've already shown us that Sirius is completely miserable at home. But it was just like James to imagine that Sirius (and everybody else) has it better than him. James is such a trouble maker!

Another fine chapter. Santa is pleased.

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