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Review:Secret Santa says:
Ho ho ho!

Now that the server is magically restored, I can come back and give more gifts!

I love the contrast you gave us in the first section, with the huge buildup of how Sirius had perfected his nail transfiguration, how gruesome his training had been, and James' obvious mirth at doing the same exact thing... and THEN how Peter was amazed at his piddly little tack and how proud he was of it. It really led right into the next section.

Madame Pomfrey was suitably kind and concerned for Remus. I liked the way that she was gentle with him and how he took it as her feeling sorry for him at first. I also liked the way you wrote his transformation as an internal thing. It made it much more personal than if you had done the physical description that we normally see, and it worked out so much better in the first person POV that you are doing.

It was fitting that we saw the laundry room through James' eyes, and felt his shock at the realization of what their punishment was. The details of the Hogwarts laundry room were really imaginative and well thought out. I found it interesting and entertaining all at the same time.

Another fun chapter to read!

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