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Review:Santa says:
I had never noticed that his eyes were such a deep brown, with little flecks of gold in them. They were actually almost nice looking... No, no, no, no. No they weren't. I can't believe I almost complimented Louis Weasley. That was close.


Gosh Darcy's internal monologue is hilarious! DON'T DENY IT, DARCY :D

Finally, the dreaded Hogsmeade date! Oh you wrote this so well. Louis and Darcy just seem so natural - their dialogue and their softer moments and everything. You have a lot of control over the pacing, which is great, but at the same time there's sort of softer insinuations of...of...something else when Louis and Darcy are talking.

And I can't believe Darcy had an actual nightmare about the date! Trapped in Madame Puddifoot's of all things :D It would've been hilarious if the Three Broomsticks turns out to be full and Louis suggests they move to Puddifoot's instead! Bahaha!

Well, I've really enjoyed reading this story as well. It was really light and funny and well-written, and Darcy was certainly very amusing and engaging as a protagonist and narrator. I think your characterisation is great; I can't wait for an update to see how things develop further between Darcy and Louis as well as Lucy and Lysander! Wonderful writing!

And Merry Christmas again and a Happy New Year :D

Author's Response: Darcy was so close to slipping up and complimenting Louis! Haha. I'm glad you like how she thinks! It's definitley a little crazy and really fun!!!
I'm so excited that you liked the Hogsmeade date! Hahaha. It was really interesting to come up with, and it was tough to get a balance between Darcy's annoyance and she and Louis actually having a decent time!
I'm so glad you're enjoying this story, and I really can't thank you enough for these amazing reviews!
Cassie :)

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