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Review:Tabby says:
Okay, first of all I have to say that was one of the best fan fics EVER! You managed to cover such a tough subject with the depth and detail it needed rather than just using her grief to move the story along. Secondly I love Faith (/Val/Tina), she has flaws which are relatable and human (and she watches Star Wars). You really let her and James' relationship build rather than just *BANG* and you didn't do the typical ''I hate you, no I love you, but you have a gf now and I'm sad'' story-line (not that I don't enjoy reading those - trashy stories are a guilty pleasure) and it was just really enjoyable to read! I wasn't too found of when it all fell apart, not because you didn't write it well or anything buy, as you said in your AN, I just sat there mentally screaming NO! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING! But that is really good, because I was so involved with the characters and so fond of them that the fact they were messing everything up was just TERRIBLE. Oh, and what was fantastic was that the fight didn't feel like it was just there because you felt like a fight was needed and it also didn't feel out of character for James and Faith to say those things (though James did shock me slightly). Finally, as a Christian myself, I am so pleased with how you addressed Faith's faith: not making it a BIG deal or shoving it in everyone's faces; and for how you showed that having issues with God affects (effects?) your whole life.
In summary: just brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much. And you're a Star Wars fan! Yay! That's my favorite movie! Believe me, I hated the fight just as much as everyone else. But it had to be done. Faith is a big deal to me, but I know it can be a sensitive issue, so I tried to tread lightly around it. I'm glad you thought I did it well.

Thanks for the wonderful review!

-Laura

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