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Review:Debbie says:
Hi, This is the first story I read by you and I must say it compelled me to leave a review which is something I've hardly ever done on this site. I adore the way you've characterized Audrey (very original) while keeping Percy's character canon compliant. I like how you play around with his quirks and make even them sexy in Audrey's eyes. I have to say I'm always looking for well-written fics on the less popular characters like Percy and it seems like your story is bound to be that. The chemistry between them is sizzling which is one reason why I and other readers love this story and by chemistry I mean they way they complement each other, the way they make each other laugh and the way they want each other. I really hope you'll complete this story. I'd love to see it get to the stage where he introduces her to the family and all their various reactions to her. Will he tell them the truth about how he met her or won't he? How would George or Lee react? I'm just dying with curiousity. So yeah, I'll be with u following this story all the way. I do hope you'll complete it. And now I'm off to read some other story by you. Thanks for a great read!

P.S. Sometimes there are still very minor mistakes regarding commas and punctuation and what not. Maybe if u could get a Beta reader, they could iron those out for you and make the flow of the language even smoother. However,on second thoughts, I'm so impatient for this story to continue that I'd rather not wait. :P

Author's Response: Hello!

We've never spoken before my dear so its very nice to meet you and thank you so much for this lovely review! D': I'd hug you but I can't teleport just yet so have a virtual fat kitten instead. :D
I really wasn't sure that anyone was really reading this story, so this really stunned me! I thought that it was rather unpopular but I'm so surprised that you like this and that other people apparently do as well. D':
I'm just so flattered, I don't even know what to say without blushing! >_<
When I first started writing this story, I wanted to make Audrey as different from Percy as say, night and day. But keeping Percy canon is actually really hard when I've already tweake his character so much. I thought that I might have made a mistake with him but I'm glad that he's still likeable.
Thank goodness.
Oh, I had to play around with his weird quirks! Audrey's a Muggle so she finds all that he does a little bizarre but as for making him sexy, well...I wasn't sure if that would come across very good. I mean, its Percy! Percy, who, we all know is not exactly the most alluring of the Weasley men (Like, say Bill. :3) but I wanted to give him another tweak. So yes, he's kind of sexy in his own way and I think that having him so buttoned down is really alluring for Audrey. She's sort of a freak like that. Hahahah.
I'm trying my hardest to get this thing done, I promise! D': I have three other WIP's to get done but since this is a short story, I'm hoping I'll get it done rather quickly. :D Just for you and the other fans! :D
I've got a slight idea on how he might introduce Audrey to his family and its pretty hialrious/awkward. But I think he'll be happy about it, I dunno and Lee and George? Oh, the teasing...hehehehe.
Thanks so much for reading! Please enjoy some of my other work if you like!
OH...the mistakes. I had rushed with this chapter so much and I intend on going back and editing but I really want to get the next chapter up. :D I'm just as impatient as you all.
Hahah.
Thanks again and much love,
Gabbie


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