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Review:Father Christmas says:
It's your Secret Santa here ;)

I confess that I'm not usually a fan of song-fics but considering your other fantastic works I thought I'd give this a try. I'm glad I did! To me this was a really poignant and beautiful story about a very sensitive topic which you pulled off brilliantly. I love how the lyrics competely related to every aspect of the story in some way or another and weren't just there for show - they had a purpose. I also thought your writing was absolutely stellar here - you presented almost a childlike view of Astoria even when she was grown up, as if she were caged to her father and the house. I loved it!

The relationship between Astoria and Draco was very delicate and well-balanced in my opinion. It's nice to actually see Draco in a position of power rather than in the books where he increasingly became under the mercy of others. I also adored the ending and the final few lines about her skin which perfectly showed the transition from friendship to something more. I also liked how they even had a friendship in the first place, which makes sense as they would have been in the same social circles but you portrayed them so well and so believably.

It's always such a joy to read your stories and this one was no exception. Everything about this was so well done and lovely and I just loved it!

Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: All your reviews were such an awesome treat, thank you much SS!

Draco and Astoria, as you can tell, are two people I really like to play around with. I love the idea that instead of Astoria saving Draco like usual, he saved. Whether in a situation like this, or if she just really lost it after the war and he saved her from himself.. just something like that instead of her being the angel that brought him back from hell.

I really wanted to address this in a sensitive way that was harsh enough for the topic, but not soo harsh that it would break ToS or feel too. sharp? Hmm. I'm not making sense.

Thank you again so much for all your perfectly amazing reviews ♥


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