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Review:Father Christmas says:
It's your Secret Santa here ;)

This was so unusual! I rarely read second person stories on here, so it's always nice to have a change. The first thing I noticed was the lovely style of this and how ethereal and soft it was, almost like poetry compared with the unusual tense. From what I've read of yours it's also a different direction for your writing so well done on trying new things!

The style actually romanticises what is a very mournful and serious story topic, though. I thought you did everything so excellently and showed the true desperation of people during these times, through the eyes of Fleur. It was really beautifully done and was such a joy to read. How she had the plan was so well executed and was just perfect.

Greyback in this was actually terrifying! I thought you wrote him really well and that he was the perfect 'bad guy' for this situation. Bill's grief when Fleur took the girl's place was so heartbreaking too, considering what had happened to him at the hands of Greyback. I actually think this piece is one of your best and I hope you consider writing more stories like this in the future! I would most definitely read them if you did.

Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Poetry! That's exactly the sort of feel I wanted for this. Ahh! Your a super awesome SS, you know that? :P

I am so happy you think this piece is one of my best! It was one of those that just started writing itself, and those always seem to be the ones that work out the best. I've actually started another one shot in second person as a present for a friend, so hopefully it will turn out well! Your review on this has really made me want to finish the one i just started, though!

Thank you again for the amazing, detailed, thoughtful reviews ♥

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