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Review:Father Christmas says:
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Wow! This was such a great chapter! The first thing that flew out at me was the incredible and very detailed world you've instantly set up for the dragons and Charlie's training. It was all so believable and realistic that you'd think JKR would have provided the information herself. I especially liked that there were three different roles for dragon-keeping - it's so well thought out!

I also loved the interactions between Tonks and Charlie, even though they'd had a fight. It was great of her to just turn up and do her own thing, so keeping in with her character more than anything than having a tearful kind of reunion. Also, I'm glad Ashton turned out to be okay and not some kind of hussy. :P

Another awesome chapter and I eagerly await the next one!

Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Ahhh thank you!! This chapter was SO fun for me to write. I was getting annoying because it never says if Charlie is a Dragon trainer, a dragon keeper...a handle.. they're all used on different sites, so I figured I'd just make all three different professions and yeah :P. Getting to dip into this and really expand on the parts JKR created but didn't explain is so much fun for me, and I know this chapter didn't have as much Charlie and Tonks in it, but I'm so thrilled that you liked it ♥

You're so awesome, thank you for stopping by!

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