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Review:Father Christmas says:
It's your Secret Santa here ;)

Well, this was definitely explosive and attention-grabbing! I would even go so far as to say it was faultless in its execution. The powerful, sensual opening set the precedence for exactly what the story was going to be about and really packed a punch for lack of a better phrase. I loved the way you characterised Astoria in such a recognisable way instantly that didn't slip the entire way through.

The way that Draco was shown in this was really well done too - it stuck to the 'essence' of his original character whilst allowing progression in the form of his hurt and pain. I felt like you really exploited that and did a good job of it. Well done!

The ending really threw me, as well! Although it can seem quite typical to introduce a sibling love triangle, you made it new with the shock factor and I like how you developed it with Draco and Astoria's argument. Factoring in the amazing writing and excellently versed sentences this is definitely a winner of a story!

Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Ahhh! I was so excited when I saw this!

I have a really different head canon for Astoria than most people... eventually I'll probably do a novel with her and Draco, but yeah. She's just kind of dangerous in my head.. more sharp than soft. If that makes sense.

I'm so happy you liked this, and you have no idea what a huge compliment it is that you liked my writing in it ♥

Ahh this reviews was just such an awesome surprise. Thank you! ♥

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