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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
I think that Lucius and Narcissa would have been done with school by the time the Marauders were in their seventh year, but this line still made me giggle: "'No, baby, I'm coming right now,' Lucius said..."

I suppose if Tonks is in the the story and Remus has a brother, then adding them in isn't a big deal. If you were to categorize this story as AU, then you could put in any characters you like. :)

Here was another slightly AU-moment that made me laugh, nonetheless: "'Voldy-something. Sounds kinda shifty if you ask me,' he responded." I think that by this point, since they knew about Death Eaters, they would have definitely known who Voldemort was -- it is funny, though. :)

No explanation of Remus's illness, yet? Madam Pomfrey's alarm makes me think it must be something worse than the usual side effects.

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