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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hello, Elphaba back again!

I like having Remus and Tonks meet in the library, even though he's supposed to be 13-14 years older than her. :) It's a cute scene. I do think that having Tonks confess to not being any good at Transfiguration is OOC, though. To become an auror, she would need to earn a NEWT in transfiguration. As a metamorphmagus, I think she'd be a natural at it, anyway.

I also like the section where Remus visits Madam Pomfrey. She doesn't get much attention, so it's nice to see her get a scene, especially since she was one of the very few people who knew his secret. I agree that she would be very sympathetic, as you potrary her.

Remus's observations on the dance made me smile: "One of the first things I noticed regarding the dance floor was a seemingly nonexistent regard for something known as personal space. Bodies were pressed tightly together, elbows jabbed ribs, feet stepped on other feet." I thought this was one of the funniest parts.

What is responsible for his illness at the end of this chapter? Is coughing up blood just another side effect of the lycanthropy, or does he have something else, like TB or internal bleeding? I hope this will be explained in the next chapter!

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