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Review:Wistful says:
Hey, Maggie!
I'd be your HPPC Secret Santa [your cue to applause right here]
So reviewing Better or Worse... a gorgeous banner by the way/
Oh, this is your NaNo, right? Brilliant to read it :3
Enough with my pointless attempts at conversation - ITS SNOWING AGAIN.
Sorry
*coughs and starts review*

Better or Worse was really a fantastic read. I absolutely loved it, and I'm really amused by James's interaction with out main character. He really seemed just like how I thought James would be. As for Emily, you did her epicly [that is a word, isn't it?]. I love how she was really reluctant about starting Hogwarts and her feelings about those robes. I've got to ask whether you're going to make the mystery identity of her father mentioned in this. After all, there has to be a reason she is Emily Brown and not some other surname.

And I love how you write. Its like the actual thoughts of this girl at the station and later at the Sorting are right there. It seems so real in a way. Of course, Hogwarts is real. Because I'm picky, the second sentence doesn't make sense to me. Am I missing something? xD On another note, I liked that sentence about finally making her mother proud. I really think its one of the absolutely best sentences you wrote.

Now to cut this off, I demand you update, alright?
Much Love and Holiday Spirit,
Wistful

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