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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello there! Happy Boxing Day :D

I'm back for more reading and reviewing! I quite enjoyed the intricacy of the Lover's Knot dance; you've certainly gone into a lot of detail to describing it and I think you've done really well :D I love the difference in the way Salazar treats Dezzy and how he treats her other sisters! If I'm not mistaken he doesn't dance the Lover's Knot with the others, just the waltz.

Well, I think you've certainly done well to develop Dezzy's growing attraction to Salazar :) This was done very well.

Overall, it was a great chapter - it was much shorter than the others, but I think the level of detail you included to show the interaction between Dez and Saz really made up for it. Great work :)

Author's Response: Hello again!
I'm so glad you enjoyed the Lover's Knot! It was hard to choreograph, and even harder to put in writing, so I'm really glad it made sense!!! I'm being really careful with the way Salazar interactts with the girls. It's a really important part of the stories, as is the dances they do together, so I'm glad you're picking up on that! thank you so much for the fabulous review!
Cassie :)


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