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Review:Santa Claus; the one and only, of course! says:
Hohoho!

What an angering story! Ok, every thing that involves Peter getting away angers me but the way you wrote this made it even more real and, therefore, more angering!

The descriptions were brilliant and all the detailing you put in there, may it be to give us an idea of how the characters looked or what they felt, and especially how the scene looked, it was all coming to life.

I really enjoyed your take on what happened on that halloween night and it felt very realistic, like this could really be the way it turned out. I can definitly imagine Sirius chassing Peter the school before loosing him to the Fat Lady.

Your characterization of Sirius was very well done. He had just the right amount of crazy/paranoid that fits nicely with how he is represented in PoA.

Great job!! And Happy Hollidays!

Author's Response: Hi again! =)

This is bit different from my usual fare, so I'm glad it feels realistic. I have always felt so sorry about Sirius's fate, so in a way I want to give him some free and happy moments before his untimely demise. Thank you for your review! =)


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