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Review:LovlyRita says:
Well I'm glad that it's not just me that sees that there is something amiss here! I'm glad I have James and Remus on my side, and I'm totally with Remus, I think there is something very weird about this girl. I dislike her entirely. Especially the way that she is trying to dig into his past, about his family and his brothers. What on earth is going on with this creepy girl!

I especially don't like that no one has seen her before and yet she's just hanging in with the school. I wonder if the administration knows anything about her, to be honest. It might be hard since classes haven't been going on but surely they've noticed that there's this extra girl? Although she does say in the last chapter that she has a class with them but I don't know if I believe her.

I don't believe anything she says!

Again, like I said in my last review I think you've done a great job building intrigue around her, and I think you've also made a great job of making her completely unlikable. Clearly Sirius is under her spell, but I think to everyone else there is an air of danger around her and you write that very well.

I think that the flow is good and it of course leaves me wanting more because I want to know what the heck is going on with this creepy purple eyed girl.

Marvelous job, and Merry Christmas!

Ash
Slytherin Secret Santa 2012

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