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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello! Santa again!

Once more, I really enjoyed this chapte. Firstly, it seemed to be just the right length. Not too short but short enough to keep it engaging. I find writing a chapter that is the perfect length can be hard but you do it well.

Remus. I like your characterisation of him and he reflects the image I had in my mind. Funny yet smart and not too immature. Well done on that.

I do like your characterisations. Catie seems to be a very bold personality and I'm starting to get her as a person now. Though I'd like to hear a bit more in this story about Helen. What is she like? She doesn't seem to get as many mentions as Catie or Dorcas. Sera is written well though, I think I'm starting to get he bigger picture of her personality now and I like her.

This chapter seemed to me to be a lot more serious than he previous one. I don't know if it was because Sera's mum had more of a mention or that there was a lot more description and thoughts but I liked it. You've seemed to link in the issue about her mum well without making it overpowering. Well done.

This chapter flowed especially well and I really like how you're going with this story. I hope Sirius starts to like Catie but he hasn't really made an appearance yet so I don't know... I'm liking Remus though and can see him being with Sera or Dorcas though if might be too early to tell.

Anyway, another great chapter! Merry Christmas,

Santa.

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