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Review:Secret Santa says:
Me again. You'll be happy to know you're still on the nice list. :P

So I really enjoyed this! It was a great prologue and a nice introduction to the story! Again, your description is one of the best I have seen. You go into so much detail yet it isnt boring.

This was quite a short chaper and I know that it is a prologue bu I would have liked it to be a little longer. It did set the scene and introduce the characters but I would have loose it to be a little more engaging.

I love the characterisation of Sera's mother. It's really sad, yet you write it with emotion but also with integrity so well done for that! I also have a lot I empathy for Sera and wonder how hard it would be if that happened to my mum so even though I can't relate, I can empathise and your writing skills help me do this!

The flow was vey good and I liked the dialogue!

Santa. :)

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