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Review:Santa Claws says:
Ho, ho, ho!!

Here I am for your third review from the first round of secret santa gifts!!

I adored this chapter!! It's always interesting to see how characters act around different characters -- it brings a hint of realism to the story. I mean, real people act slightly different around their friends than they do around their employer or their families. This little meeting between Grace and her mum was no different!! I loved being able to see some of her thoughts and seeing a bit of her back story. I really like her -- she's quite practical, not holding grudges against her grandfather for his involvement with the death eaters. Her saying that he just made a mistake is much more realistic than if she thought it were 100% acceptable or 100% wrong.

I also enjoyed your characterization of Grace's mum. She's an interesting lady. I thought it was cool that she sold the family estate to a national trust. Those old castles have to come from somewhere!! lol.

lololol. Francis as Grace's boyfriend. Oh boy. Quite anxious to see how this trip goes or if it goes. Annnd oh my goodness, I wonder what's going on at the station!! I hope it's nothing too terrible.

You've done an excellent job with this story so far! Your characters are great and every chapter has been interesting and fun to read. I'm so glad I got you as my secret santa, else I may never have read this. Great work!!

merry christmas with love from,
santa claws

Author's Response: Yay! Another review!
This was a great chapter to write- in all honesty Grace's parents are some of my favorite characters, particularly her mother. It's also quite hard to write, however, because I think her relationship with her mother is quite difficult to put across. For me, at least. So I'm glad you seem to think I did okay.
I love the national trust castles! I literally spent my life at one of them when I was little, and I used to imagine it was all magical, so perhaps that inspired me somehow? IdK haha.

Thank you so much again for the review,
Charlie!


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