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Review:Yolanda Yaxley the Yuletide Yak says:
oh my gosh, there was so much amazing action in this chapter! I love how so much went on, especially compared to the first, crucial, characterising Act. Not having to transition between scenes really helps to keep the plot moving, I think, but you still manage to create each scene's new, rich atmosphere so well.

I liked the developments in each character's standing, because you've somehow developed each character so fully already that I very invested in their outcomes. The description of Cygnus' acting with Kreacher was so clever, making me hate him so much even before his men took Sirius away and were so nasty! and it's refreshing that you've developed Regulus and Sirius' personalities too, as younger characters are often just written off as 'were silly and childish'; they seem much more regal and prepared to take the throne; much more pureblood.

I also can't get over the clever way you've used so many canon characters in Shakespearian positions! It really does feel like a likely translation for Dumbledore to be a wise aide, Winky to be the cook, Moody as head of security, Pomfrey as the potioneer, etc., and seeing them in these new positions is far more interesting than original characters!

I can't wait to meet the Marauders next chapter, too! That ending is so evil :O

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