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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
I'm back for another review.

As I mentioned in my previous review, I am very impressed by the originality and unique storyline present in this fanfiction. These chapters are certainly very interesting, and I must encourage you to continue writing.

The plot was excellent - it really kept me in suspense. You jumped right into the action with your first chapter, which captivated me from the very beginning, but didn't provide much of an explanation of what had occurred prior to these events. I'm assuming that you were aiming for this air of mystery, and such things will be revealed in future chapters, but I'm not very good at waiting for chapter updates. Please update soon! Additionally, your flow was also outstanding and the events transitioned nicely from one to the next.

I found the detail in this chapter to be perfectly balanced with the amount of dialogue - you described her descent into the house, each of the directors, and the room where she was sworn into the society perfectly. I was very impressed.

Great job!

Author's Response: What? Another highly praise-filled review from you?! Wowza! When I requested a review from you, I thought that you would absolutely rip this story to shreds... It's the sort of thing that I don't necessarily like, but I find it necessary to become better at writing.

But this review gives me a lot to think about, as well! I realize that there isn't much backstory, but fear not!! I have planned a bit for the next chapter (when I write it...). I will try my best to get it on the site in maybe late January? However, that might not be possible, because real life is very trying. :p

Anyways, thank you for complimenting the detail and dialogue balance, which is something that I've had to work very hard to achieve. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

And yes, from me, you can have the virtual Internet hug that you claim to need. (I just love your penname... It makes me laugh!) :)

~UnluckyStar57


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