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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I've got to say, I adored this first chapter! Your use of imagery was so perfect and gave this chapter an almost eerie sort of feel. I could almost picture the cottage in my mind.

I love that this first chapter has me asking questions already. The whole vibe of it is so mysterious, which is awesome! I'm already wondering what's going to happen to Lily and where she is going to end up.

Your portrayal of Lily is really good. Though we don't know much about her yet, I can see that she is going to be a very interesting and unusual character-different from the other portayals of Lily that I have read. I already feel bad for what happened to her with the whole Quidditch accident!

The whole idea of this story intriguing and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much! It's fantastic to hear that you've enjoyed the first chapter (I've always worried that it was the weakest), especially that it was so vivid and effectively set the scene for the story. :D

Lily is definitely different from other portrayals, at least those that I've seen. In one of my other stories, I made her the villain (of a sort), so I challenged myself to instead show her in the opposite way - it's one of the great things that we can do with the next-gen characters. :)

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