Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Butterbeer says:
Major breakdown, but I feel like you could have made this even more meaningful and expressive if you would have added body movements and facial expressions into your narration of this event. Very good dialog nevertheless. I'm almost interested with the way this is written if it would have been okay for Draco to say no under any circumstances. So how long til Draco comes around? Interesting bit about the lineage of Molly :) Funny too. How did Ginny know who everyone was? Even Ginny could see that Krum was crazy - really shows her true colors, doesn't it. Another super well written chapter!!

Author's Response: I know, I felt that way too. I rewrote this chapter so many times and in the end I just gave up. I could have made it better but that also could have made it worse - does that make sense?

Draco is getting there, he's mostly at war with himself, he projects what he feels others are thinking of him.

Ginny works in a way of her own, I think she's more clever than anyone realises - and really she'd have to be with six brothers - it's just part of the mystery that she knows who everyone is.

~Zyii


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 695
Submit Report: