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Review:Butterbeer says:
I'm honestly mildly confused as to why the Daily Prophet would report ordinary mundane happenings at Hogwarts - I think this part of the story either needs to be fully developed or scrapped. You could make it into something very cool - I encourage you to expand for sure. Great insight about her position! What is a familiar? Is that another name for a pet? So now she has a kneazle (?) and an owl k... Very funny that they were all so concerned with keeping her safe and then let her dodge them in an uneventful situation. I could see if something crazy happened, but wow, absentminded much lol? How did he recognize her, was her picture in the paper? What's he gonna do? Rape her? Why is he not calling her Evvie? I'm scared for her!! I think you could have developed this event more - some dialogue, get everyone more involved, develop the characters a bit more. Go for it!! Well done otherwise :)

Author's Response: This chapter I have to admit was more of a filler in between some heavier stuff.

A familiar is another name for a pet.

He recognised her from her mannerisms and gossip that was travelling around.

I admit I might have had some writers block in this chapter. I just went back and reread it. It could use some padding out, I wish I had enough time to do that! I'll get round to it I'm sure.

~Zyii


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