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Review:teh tarik says:
holy mother of what what what what what

so OK, Krum was pretending...I mean Wood was pretending to be arrrggghh!! YOU GOT ME ON THIS ONE. I can't believe I said in my last review that I ship Krum/Edie! Arrgh! I agree with Edie when she thinks Oliver Wood is a "little twat". I have been duped well...too well.

I WOULD LIKE TO STOP SEEING THINGS FROM EDIE'S POV...ah, she's just too easily swindled! And so am I.

OK, my disbelief aside...I loved this chapter. LOVE. And I am backing Edie fully to dig out as much dirt from Wood and publish it all to the world. And oh god SEAMUS. I knew it! I knew he would turn up! Having Seamus turn up was brilliant. I mean you could have just left it with Edie discovering "Krum's" true identity, but Seamus fanboy-ing in the periphery and slapping tables with laughter at Edie's predicament is just...priceless. And I know Dean is sort of overshadowed by Seamus and Edie in this chapter, but I really really enjoyed that small moment between him and Edie in her flat. Their bro-lationship just makes me go all warm and fuzzy inside. It's a lovely touch to both their characterisations. From this chapter it sort of feels like Dean is the supportive one who helped Edie get the job and calms her down when she gets all worked up - while Seamus is the one who blunders into things and makes things so much more difficult and annoying for poor Edie! Aaaah I love them both.

I've read some fics where the OC usually is the one who gets really sloshed and does a bunch of crazy stuff which she has no recollection of by the following morning...only to be painfully reminded by her mates or even her potential love interest. So I'm very glad to see in this fic that it's Edie who's the sober one, and that right now she seems to be having the upper hand on Oliver.

Aahh I really enjoyed this chapter; the twist was just wonderful. And I was caught unawares completely. I really feel for Edie you know?! Anyway, I hope you weren't expecting too many helpful comments or concrit or anything...because I can't give any of those with my brain still lying in pieces all over the place. Krum was...Wood. Ah. Still trying to wrap my head round that one. Brilliant!

Looking forward to reading the next chapter! And thanks for the swap! Happy Hols!


-teh

Author's Response: YES I get entirely too excited when I see that somebody else fell for my little trick! XD Although I would totally love to see some Krum/Edie, hehe.

I actually considered writing another chapter from somebody else's point of view, but I just relate to Edie too much. It's too easy, I can't give it up!! And you've totally hit the nail on the head with your perceptions of Dean and Seamus and their relationship to Edie ;D I had a whole lot of fun with writing their interactions in chapter seven in particular.

And you are more than welcome for the review swap--your story was absolutely amazing! I actually forgot to favorite it though, because I am really good at having a short attention span, so I'm going to do that right now before I forget!

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