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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Holiday Review Swap!

You need to write more! xD I'm really loving this.

It makes me so sad how devastated George is, he's just unravelling. I hope his family manage to actually try and support him rather than dismiss him. Poor Georgie :(

I wonder what's going on in the outside world while this is all happening. Obviously the world is saved, but George's world is destroyed.

I liked Ron's speech, he seemed very in character, as did Mrs Weasley and Percy :)

As always, wonderful job! Please update!

Author's Response: Everyone in the Weasley family is unravelling a little from Fred's death, and perhaps they're grieving in their own private ways :) George is more closed off than the others; he's really isolated in his grief - at least that's what I've been trying to write in this scene.

I do have a shift in POV in a later chapter (chapter 5) where the state of the outside world will be revealed in a little more detail...and I really hope this shift won't be too sudden or disruptive...I'm getting really nervous about writing it :( But right now you won't see much of the external world because Fred is not in it and George is just so...isolated. Poor twins :P

And I'm so glad you think the characterisations are OK :) They can be tricky to get right sometimes!

Thanks for your lovely review!

-teh

PS: I'm going to have to check out your story soon!


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