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Review:tovsy says:
Ohmygoodness! I absolutely adored this from start to finish. Awesome plot, perfect execution and WICKED characterization. I'm in love with all the characters ep! And everything was so well-planned and well-thought out too! It's clear you spent heaps of time working out all the minute plot details and the sequence and whatever dovthst it all cane together and made sense. All the secrets really kept me on my toes, and ngl some really caught me by surprise haha! But my favourite thing about this story is that it was so realistic! I mean, James is AN ACTUAL TEENAGE BOY! He wasn't irrevocably in love with Avery, even though we all ship Javery 5ever haha. He had other suitors and I was seriously waving the Jaley flag for a bit. I love that you didn't get James and Avery back together since reality is, life doesn't just become perfect in one chapter :P (and of course that means more Javery in the sequel haha) speaking of, I'm going to wrap up this review so I can read it!! So congratulations on such an epic story, and thank you for sharing it with us. You're amazing!

Author's Response: Haha, you give me so much credit :) you're so nice. And I'm thrilled that you liked it .Seriously. I am very fond of the characters in this story, especially james, and very proud of the way he was able to grow through its chapters.

I'm also glad you don't mind they're not together in the end. I want to pump as much realism as possible into each story I put on here just because sometimes that's what happens. You have to let someone go and try to go back to normal...and see what happens.

Thank you and I hope you like the sequel!

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