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Review:accioviola says:
This story is fantastic! Everything that occurs connects very neatly to the information that J.K. Rowling has already provided. I particularly enjoy your character development, because the characters are well rounded. I love exploring the more minor, "evil" characters. JKR never fully developed Wormtail, so it is nice to see this development. It is also fantastic seeing Snape and Lily's relationship grow, or maybe more accurately, see them becoming more distant, because JKR's scene where Snape calls Lily a mudblood was not convincing enough. One incident does not make a person hate another person, it is a series of incidences. This is a concept that I feel you grasp very well. And also, I appreciate how much you acknowledge the grey area's between good and evil, because it makes the story more realistic. It makes readers think and question, which, I believe, are what all good books should do. This is a flaw the Harry Potter series has. The series has a distinct difference between good and evil. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your future chapters.

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